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Hey Grace, I love how you posted about your hobbies. I really like to do crafty stuff. I think next time you could add more detail to your words and maybe you could add more sentences to your description.Nia :)
Hi Grace.I like how you made it quite long I had a fun time reading through it.Maybe next time you could put a different color so its easier to read.I find this relatable because I love art, cooking and music though mostly music.What was you're mindset when you were making this.See ya hoppe you see this grace. From Liam
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Hey Grace, I love how you posted about your hobbies. I really like to do crafty stuff. I think next time you could add more detail to your words and maybe you could add more sentences to your description.
ReplyDeleteNia :)
Hi Grace.
ReplyDeleteI like how you made it quite long I had a fun time reading through it.
Maybe next time you could put a different color so its easier to read.
I find this relatable because I love art, cooking and music though mostly music.
What was you're mindset when you were making this.
See ya hoppe you see this grace. From Liam