This is a great piece of writing all about playing Spot light on camp. What an awesome place to play spot light. It sounds like camp was so much fun! What was the best thing about going to Mistletoe Bay? Do you have a favourite? I like the images that you have used on your writing, it gives people an idea of what the area looks like. I hope that your learning from home is going well. I look forward to reading more of your work while we are all working from home!
Hello Grace! How are you doing? Are you enjoying Learning from Home? I enjoyed reading your Hide and Seek writing. You really did manage to paint a picture of what was happening through your descriptive writing. I especially like that you used the word "quiver". It makes your writing so much more interesting when you use such unusual words. The big question is...is this story based on fact? Did you actually play spotlight while on camp in Mistletoe Bay? You are a great writer, Grace and I look forward to reading some more of your writing. See you soon, Mrs Gully
Hi Grace
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of writing all about playing Spot light on camp. What an awesome place to play spot light. It sounds like camp was so much fun!
What was the best thing about going to Mistletoe Bay? Do you have a favourite?
I like the images that you have used on your writing, it gives people an idea of what the area looks like.
I hope that your learning from home is going well. I look forward to reading more of your work while we are all working from home!
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)
Hello Grace!
ReplyDeleteHow are you doing? Are you enjoying Learning from Home?
I enjoyed reading your Hide and Seek writing. You really did manage to paint a picture of what was happening through your descriptive writing. I especially like that you used the word "quiver". It makes your writing so much more interesting when you use such unusual words. The big question is...is this story based on fact? Did you actually play spotlight while on camp in Mistletoe Bay?
You are a great writer, Grace and I look forward to reading some more of your writing.
See you soon,
Mrs Gully